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  1. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Eleven Updated 29/11/2014

    There's nothing to apologize for friend. I should be the one apologizing for my poor sense of humour:laughter:
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    Re: Forgotten Tales of Germania

    I hope the same thing doesn't happen to this AAR that befell your previous R2TW AAR. Would be a mighty shame if it did because this has lots of promise.
  3. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Eleven Updated 29/11/2014

    Yes I was, I do know who Hideyoshi is. I don't think you could set an AAR in Japan without knowing who Hideyoshi is
  4. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Eleven Updated 29/11/2014

    Brilliant chapter and who is this new guy, Hideyoshi. Isn't he a historical figure or something? I'm probably making up things
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    Re: Vengeance and Forgivness

    Wow I really like this. A very interesting start and it shows lots of potential. I like this Yaemon guy, he seems a good choice for protagonist. Love the setting and I'm glad to see another Feudal...
  6. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 17 - 28.11.14

    Another good chapter. Hitsumei is almost developing like a reverse Stockholm syndrome where the kidnapper falls in love with their prisoner. Can't wait for more
  7. Re: [SS 6.4] Imperial Purple Never Fades

    Some epic stuff, can't wait until the siege of Constantinople. Glad you also decided to crop the photos of the UI gives it a much more professional feel. Keep it up
  8. Re: [M2:Crusades/SS 6.4] - The Dragon of the Levant, or the Legend of William Argall

    Sad to hear that your Danish AAR is ending but this is very good stuff. I'm intrigued by this Red Dragon and hope you continue along with this.
  9. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Ten Updated 25/11/2014

    Well, I do really like Ieyasu but I feel there are some good opportunities to further his development. He is currently missing a love interest so you could add one or explore why he doesn't have one....
  10. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Ten Updated 25/11/2014

    Thrilling chapter, really edge of your seat stuff. I loved the fight descriptions, it's really a strong point in your writing. I was a bit confused though with Nobunaga's intentions. He questions why...
  11. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: November 23, 2014]

    Another good chapter and I liked the bit about the Polish and the Otomans, gave a bit of nice info on the rest of the world.
  12. Re: Éirí Amach: Irish Rising (Ireland AAR) [updated November 23, 2014]

    Some really great stuff. You're writing and prose is good and the dialogue interesting. Furthermore, the plot and scenario you've chose is interesting and intriguing and the rebellion was well...
  13. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XIX 23/11)

    Hahahahahaha, I would pay to see someone dressed as a samurai on a vespa
  14. Re: Steel and Flowers AH of the Crusades (Updated 11/20)

    An interesting start. I liked the interchange between the Saracen and Sir Godfrey and the way the king intervened was good as well. I hope you continue this, it definitely has promise.
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    Chapter XIX- "For the good of the clan" is out now!
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  16. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVIII 16/11)

    Chapter XIX- For the good of the clan

    1559-Spring

    Bang! I let loose another shot from the metal arquebus that I held in both hands at shoulder height. In the weeks after the battle I had taken...
  17. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVIII 16/11)

    Edit; Repost
  18. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVIII 16/11)

    Thanks for the kind words and welcome to the site.
  19. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Nine Updated 23/11/2014

    There is a definite difference between them. I think what is so good about both the characters is that they are different but they are similar which I find is good. Both want to go home and thats...
  20. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVIII 16/11)

    Thank you for your kind words and I'm glad you enjoyed Chikakata's character, he's going to be in the story for a quite a bit and I can assure you he'll constantly be a thorn in Yuki's side.

    Next...
  21. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Nine Updated 23/11/2014

    Wow just wow. Sorry I didn't reply earlier but I forgot you already uploaded part of Chapter 8 so i was waiting for you to post it and then you posted Chapter 9 and I was like wait what? But then I...
  22. Re: [SS 6.4] Imperial Purple Never Fades

    This is absolutely great stuff. I just read through all of it and I must say I do love it. I think your 'flashback' are great at setting up the future plot and providing some interesting back story...
  23. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 16 - 21.11.14

    This chapter is definitely a change of pace and style. I like this new protagonist even if he killed all our old ones.
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    The vote's already gone up Tigellinus:)
  25. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: November 20, 2014]

    Thrilling stuff! That battle was so exciting to read and I am in awe of your General William Pepperell's tactics. I didn't think you'd win that. Keep up the good work.
  26. Re: A fox in a land of wolves. (Denmark AAR)

    I liked your fight description, it was fast paced and well done. I wonder what will happen next and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter
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    I know how you feel, school drains the life out of you. But good to see you back:smile:
  28. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVIII 16/11)

    Thank for your kind words, Alwyn, always means a lot.
  29. Re: A fox in a land of wolves. (Denmark AAR)

    This looks like it's going to be very interesting. I do wonder what they will happen when they get to India. I think your protagonist has lots of potential and I wonder if he is going to listen to...
  30. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: November 16, 2014]

    Things don't seem to be going good for the British and it victory seems far from certain. I'm excited to see what happens in the next battle and can't wait.
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    Chapter XVIII- "An Unforgotten Treachery" is out now!
    1545- Sengoku Jidai....
  32. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Chapter XVIII- An Unforgotten Treachery

    1559-Spring
    Tawara Chikakata

    “Tono?” Tawara Chikakata bowed, though only as low as he had to and not an inch lower. He stood proud at the entrance to...
  33. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 15 - 15.11.14

    Why do you do this to us? You better have Act 2 already written up!
  34. Re: [SS 6.3] Raiders across the Sea: A Denmark AAR

    Just read the last two chapters, very funny. Your humour is a refreshing break from everything and I especially liked the part on our useless Crusades were. Keep on with this it is quite marvellous.
  35. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    You might have to wait a bit for Akara but I can assure you she will have a strong presence going forward in the story
  36. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Here's a little update about what's going on.

    Well, I haven't done much writing in the past three weeks mainly due to my yearly exams taking a tremendous toll on me. However, I have started the...
  37. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: November 10, 2014]

    Absolutely great stuff and it's wonderful to see you back. Your skill in describing battles hasn't seemed to fade while you were away and your description of the British going off to war was well...
  38. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 15 - 15.11.14

    Wow, just wow. Sorry I haven't commented or been around much, its been a really hectic and tiring past weeks. Our two protagonists seem to be dead so I wonder where this story is going to go. Great...
  39. Re: A Missionary's Perspective: The Diary of Tullio de Sao Joao

    Can't wait till you update this, is it still alive?
  40. Sticky: Poll: Re: MAARC LIII! - 2nd Place Tie-breaker!

    A tie in a tie breaker! How ironic.

    Also, only one other voter apart from myself! Come on people, we can do better than that.

    So what now, Scottish King, is there another tie breaker?
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