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    Poll: Re: The British EU Referendum: In or Out

    Basically this. I don't care what your opinion is on this referendum, violence is not something that we should have on our streets. And again, using this incident to make a political point about...
  2. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 20/05/16) Links the OP updated)

    So, another chapter. Shorter, but sweeter, methinks.


    Hralfur stared into the blank eyes of the boy he’d just killed for a moment, before the lifeless corpse fell aside with a heavy thump....
  3. Re: The thoughts of the man who mocks-Lortano's Blog.

    Playing to one's strengths- My thoughts.

    Remember when you were bad at sports at school and your parents would lightly tap you on the shoulder and say 'You can't be good at everything,' while your...
  4. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 08/05/16) New updates every Sunday!)

    Right, I'm updating all the links in the OP so everything is up to date. Currently in the middle of exams so no update this Sunday, though I am very close to finishing the next chapter. In the...
  5. Re: Dans l'ombre de l'Aigle - "Under the Shadow of the Eagle' - By isa0005 (Last Updated: 2/11/2016 - Chapter Five Coming Soon!)

    Glad to hear it chap. Hopefully things go well for you!
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    Re: MCWC XIV - Submission/Nomination Thread

    The Skymaster's Shadow

    Even the cruelest monsters were once men....
  7. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 24/04/16) New updates every Sunday!)

    So I've been working on this little side story for a while and I think, character development wise, that it might be one of my best.

    Thaddeus thumbed through an interesting book hed found in...
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    The Skymaster's Shadow

    I have to say that I've forgotten a lot about who I once was, or how I became the man I am today. But I remember, as clear as the night sky, the day that it all began-...
  9. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 19/04/16) New updates every Sunday!)

    So then. Who wants to see the end of this little saga? Two chapters to get this out of the way.



    It was late evening when they finally approached the walls of the city. Carson couldn’t help...
  10. Re: The thoughts of the man who mocks-Lortano's Blog.

    God I've been looking forward to this update for a long time!

    I can finally announce that the First Arc of the Skymaster's Shadow is just about finished. And by that I mean some editing is...
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    The Skymaster's Shadow

    "You know, I've had bullets removed from me, friends die in front of me and even once had a man throw himself off edge of a ship to his death. But I can safetly that the...
  12. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 11/04/16) New updates every Sunday!)

    So, a tad late, but I have actually been writing this short chapter and the next two after it. These next two will be published together on Sunday and will be...I don't want to say unmissable, but...
  13. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 12/03/16) New updates every Sunday!)

    AT LAST! HA HA HA!

    But seriously, I've been head scratching for ages. This chapter was mostly written today, at least the second half was and that was only after I talked to a friend about my...
  14. Re: The thoughts of the man who mocks-Lortano's Blog.

    On my dry patches and why I find myself struggling with all this nonsense.

    So, two weeks since a Skymaster's Shadow update. Why? Well, we'll go over said reasons now.

    First of all, I've dun...
  15. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 29/02/16) New updates every Sunday!)

    So, new chapter a day early because I have work to do over this weekend and I've already spent another week working on this. This is the first half of a mega chapter that I split into two because it...
  16. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Yearly Awards 2015 Results!!!!!!

    Having also taken the time to look through the actual polls (Perks of being staff I guess) I'd like to say a few things before my obligatory thank yous.

    First of all, in practically every category...
  17. Re: Himyar - From Yemen to Africa and back again.

    By this I mean that you can never go wrong with adding in more screenshots, as well as expanding on what you've written beneath existing screenshots, perhaps explaining certain things, perhaps...
  18. Re: Himyar - From Yemen to Africa and back again.

    Pretty nice start right here. A few more screenshots and explanation would be nice, but what you have here is perfectly fine! Also, I laughed at the idea of the one Jewish faction running a budget...
  19. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 29/02/16) New updates every Sunday!)

    The carnivorous bison is my favourite character thus far.
  20. Re: The thoughts of the man who mocks-Lortano's Blog.

    7th March 2016

    God I find Latin to be a hard language to learn. It reminds me a little of the monster in a bad horror film, where the monster comes back to life despite being dead. Participles,...
  21. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 29/02/16) New updates every Sunday!)

    So.

    At the moment, I'm working on the next chapter. It has turned out to be a HUGE chapter, I haven't even added any serious description or any indications as to who is actually speaking yet and...
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    Poll: Re: The British EU Referendum: In or Out

    Nicola Sturgeon has given some (Surprisingly good) advice to Big Dave regarding tactics in this referendum.

    http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-scotland-scotland-politics-35683387

    As it so happens, I...
  23. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 24/02/16) New updates every Sunday!

    Maybe my work with Attila: Total War inspired this one, but I feel that this makes a bit of sense in the context of the world.



    Three days. For three days he had been dragged on this...
  24. The thoughts of the man who mocks-Lortano's Blog Commentary Thread

    Post away!
  25. The thoughts of the man who mocks-Lortano's Blog.

    28th February 2016

    On what the hell inspired me to write here and a brief history of my writing history.

    Let's start with introductions. Hi, I'm Lortano, writer of stories that people seem to...
  26. Re: An Ebdanian AAR: With love from the Emerald Isle (Updated 05/02/16)

    As you can see, I've shortened the lines of text. This was because I realised that when the screenshots were opened the lines would
    disappear off the edge of the screen. This was the best way to...
  27. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 09/02/16) New updates every Sunday!

    So, once again I miss a deadline due to work and the fact that I'm having trouble getting these last few chapters up to standard. While I can't really give you anything substantial, I will give this...
  28. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 09/02/16) New updates every Sunday!

    So, once more updated at absurd times in the morning, here's the next chapter, another one for Nosorum. Initially, this was created in order to get one character to go to where I wanted them, so I...
  29. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 09/02/16) New updates every Sunday!

    This turned into something far bigger than I initially planned, but it seems to have turned out alright. I have the outline for next few main story chapters, leading up to the end of the first Act of...
  30. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 24/01/16) New updates every Sunday!

    22 years previously

    Thaddeus looked up from his bedside table, as the heavy rain intensified outside and started to make audible noise on the window.

    “What a night for this nonsense.” He...
  31. Re: An Ebdanian AAR: With love from the Emerald Isle

    A long one, but a satisying one.



    With Wales under my control, albeit slightly unhappy due to me murdering all of them, I set my sights on the rest of the province of Britannia Inferior. Of...
  32. An Ebdanian AAR: With love from the Emerald Isle (Updated 05/02/16)

    So, with my writing currently in a rut so deep that you'd need a sub that could dive to the bottom of the Pacific Ocean, I decided to play some Attila. Like many, I bought this game expecting very...
  33. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 24/01/16) New updates every Sunday!

    Ugh...so, where do I begin?

    First of all, sorry for the lack of update this week. Honestly, for a long time I was able to keep ahead for a long time because I'd written much of the early chapters...
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    The Skymaster's Shadow.


    Read the next exciting installment in the swashbuckling adventure right here. Carson still lives, but his adventures are about to go much, much further than he'd ever...
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    Re: Machines (CW/Sci-Fi)

    You are damned good at this whole dramatic escape nonsense. You certainly have me eager for more. Keep up the good work!
  36. Re: TotW 248: Motivation- "What stirs us to action?"

    265 Words. Have fun.

    The Motivation

    Why? Why resist them? We face odds that not even a god could overcome! If we flee, we might survive but if we stay, we die.

    A hand...
  37. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 20/12/15) New updates every Sunday!

    With all the wonderful feedback comes the next chapter. The pace is starting to pick up.

    Carson woke with a bucket of cold water being thrown over him, a cold chill running through him as he...
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    Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Yearly Awards 2015

    I must confess that I have kept my nominations to the CW section, honestly I haven't read many AARs. Anyway, lets get to it.

    CWOTY: Of Souls by Shankbot de Bodemloze

    Best Creative Writer:...
  39. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 20/12/15) New updates every Sunday!

    So, with about three weeks worth of forum lost to the ether, I'll re add all of the chapters that were lost. No new one this week, I've been busy with exams throughout the week and spending spare...
  40. Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 06/12/15) New updates every Sunday!

    Thaddeus kept a wary eye on the alleys on either side of the cobbled roads. Beside him, Hralfur had a hand on his scimitar. In six months of training, he’d grown impressively, to the point that men...
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