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  1. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XX 19/12)

    Thank you for your kind words. I too see the benefits of long and short chapters. I usually just end my chapters where I see fit and where they end or where I picture them to end. I was just...
  2. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Ahhh CK2, she is a deadly beast and will devour your time like ravenous wolf may an abandoned carcass. She will destroy those of weak hearts and minds. I ask you King of the Scots, are you strong...
  3. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XIX 23/11)

    Yay the chapters finally up! As you can see it's quite a long chapter and I liked to know whether you want longer or shorter chapter updates. Sorry for the delays but hopefully the next one will be...
  4. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XIX 23/11)

    Chapter XX- Delays on the path to revenge

    1559-Spring

    Chosokabe Motochika

    Chosokabe Motochika woke abruptly, covered in sweat and breathing heavily. His wife, Emura Akara, lay naked next to...
  5. Re: A Time for Courage and, above all, Hope

    I'm still curious about what is this siege that's going on and who is this Lord Klax and where are we and when are we and so many questions. I demand there this to continue until I find the answers...
  6. Re: A Return to Greatness (France AAR)

    Another interesting chapter but sadly the lack of spaces made it hard to read again. As Alwyn suggested, click "Go advanced" when posting in quick reply and then from there you can click "Preview...
  7. Re: A Return to Greatness (France AAR)

    Thats ok then, I have similar issues with spaces between paragraphs, just ensure that you reread it through or just glance through it once you've copied it into the TWC reply thing.
  8. Re: A Return to Greatness (France AAR)

    The last two chapters were good but for some reason in Chapter 3 at least two words per sentence were stuck together i.e. no space between the words. This made it kinda hard to read and there were...
  9. Re: Éirí Amach: Irish Rising (Ireland AAR) [updated: December 14, 2014]

    I liked the idea of the bible verses being the key to the code. The siege of Edinburgh looks to be tricky but I wonder if they'll even make it to Edinburgh without any mishaps.
  10. Re: A Return to Greatness (France AAR)

    I like the start of this, and the term "It has just begun" is apt for nearly any Total War game. Its so good to see another ETW AAR. Keep up the good work.
  11. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XIX 23/11)

    Another update, chapter will be out today or tomorrow, I do promise. This chapter is about twice as long as the last one so I do hope that makes up for it as well. Plus there are some screenshots to...
  12. Re: A Missionary's Perspective: The Diary of Tullio de Sao Joao

    Love it! Much more immersive!
  13. Re: The Wings of Destiny - a FotS AAR (Updated Chapter 11 - Dec 14)

    Good to see this up and going again but with that cliffhanger you can't go another month, not even another week without giving us another update. That would just be cruel beyond belief.
  14. Re: A Missionary's Perspective: The Diary of Tullio de Sao Joao

    Hahahaha the "Fire and Brimstone Bible Thumper" tactic, proved to work after testing on pretty much every non-christian nation. One little criticism, I don't think "Regards to the Reader" is a good...
  15. Re: The White Horse (Hanover AAR) Updated Dec 9

    Wonderful to see you updating this, loved the bit with the Prussian king. Can't wait for more.
  16. Re: A Time for Courage and, above all, Hope

    Interesting start, I won't to know more about this Lewis guy as well as this Lord Weasley. And what is this siege we've been thrown head into? I hope you give us all these answers.
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    Re: The Carribean war

    Loved the last two chapters, especially the one about the 2nd coalition war, some really good backstory is vital for interesting story telling this late in the campaign. Keep the good writing up but...
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    Sticky: Re: MAARC LIII - Winners!!!

    Congrats to bourbon for winning and for being a pioneer in the still infant R2TW AAR sub-forum.

    And to Hitai, next tie breaker will be to the death, no ties, you either win or you die:duel:
  19. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Eleven Updated 29/11/2014

    Ahhh the benefits of already being on holiday........
  20. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Hey is the AAROTY going to go ahead this year or has that been shelved?
  21. Re: Éirí Amach: Irish Rising (Ireland AAR) [updated: December 7, 2014]

    Another good chapter, I liked the use of the image in it as well. Keep up the good work.
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    Re: The Carribean war

    A really interesting AAR you have started. I liked the premise of this (did you get it from Paradox by any chance) and there is solid writing. I loved the soldier's memoirs and remarks likes ...
  23. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: December 6, 2014]

    And what is that mean to mean?:hmm:

    Ahh so the war in India is won but the one in Europe looms even greater. Will that be the war to end all wars, I wonder.
  24. Re: A Missionary's Perspective: The Diary of Tullio de Sao Joao

    Don't worry about the updates everyone struggles with updating regularly :unsure:



    I liked this bit and I hope you continue on the theme, can't wait for more.
  25. Re: A fox in a land of wolves. (Denmark AAR)

    Interesting chapter, I liked the captain's heroic last stand. However, their were some tense changes throughout the chapter which just need some going over. But good work.

    Also, it be useful for...
  26. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 18 - 5.12.14

    Ooooh more supernaturalness. I like it. I wonder if there are more like Shinji......
  27. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: December 4, 2014]

    Ahhh the British are back and the war looks a lot better but will luck switch to the Mughal's side once again or will Pepperrell and co end this war once and for all?

    I NEED MORE!!!!
  28. Re: [SS 6.4] Imperial Purple Never Fades

    Great chapter, it was really, really good.Love the flashback to the first sacking and Theodoro's speeches were truly inspiring. Can't wait to see what's next now.
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    Sticky: Re: The Critic's Quill: Issue 44

    And at times, the problem is trying to combine both those exceptions and the status quo role of women. But I agree that it's also important to have powerful women.
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    Sticky: Re: The Critic's Quill: Issue 44

    Its really great to see articles creating discussion and debate, I think thats what they should aim to do, be the starting point from which further discussion arises.

    This is just my two cents...
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    Re: The City Of Grey

    Seems interesting and I like the name you have chosen for the city. But is this meant to be the beginning of the story or just like some background information. Also if you want tips on creating lore...
  32. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Yeah it definitely is. I was fearful of the 3 hour running time but it didn't feel like that at all and for me, it was just a really epic movie but I'll leave that up to you to decide
  33. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XIX 23/11)

    Just an update, the next chapter will be out later this week. I was a bit strained for time this week and this chapter will be a bit longer than usual as well. I thank you all for your patience....
  34. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    When's it coming out? And is it just in China or International?
  35. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Nonsense, we have plenty to talk about. Like errrrr......errrrr....the weather?

    On a different note, I saw Interstellar the other day. I really great movie, I thought, it just felt so epic in its...
  36. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    I think there has been quite enough talk about magic wands. Quite enough....
  37. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Isn't there something in the TWC constitution about becoming addicted to a certain ring of power? Either that or just being creepy.
  38. Re: Éirí Amach: Irish Rising (Ireland AAR) [two new chapters on November 29, 2014]

    I really loved the battle description, it was very well done. Can't wait to see whether our protagonist will be able to break the code, or if the traitors will find him first. Keep up the good work.
  39. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Love your new Christmas themed sig, Shankbot. Very festive
  40. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Eleven Updated 29/11/2014

    There's nothing to apologize for friend. I should be the one apologizing for my poor sense of humour:laughter:
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