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  1. Re: [SS 6.4] Imperial Purple Never Fades

    This is absolutely great stuff. I just read through all of it and I must say I do love it. I think your 'flashback' are great at setting up the future plot and providing some interesting back story...
  2. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 16 - 21.11.14

    This chapter is definitely a change of pace and style. I like this new protagonist even if he killed all our old ones.
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    The vote's already gone up Tigellinus:)
  4. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: November 20, 2014]

    Thrilling stuff! That battle was so exciting to read and I am in awe of your General William Pepperell's tactics. I didn't think you'd win that. Keep up the good work.
  5. Re: A fox in a land of wolves. (Denmark AAR)

    I liked your fight description, it was fast paced and well done. I wonder what will happen next and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter
  6. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    I know how you feel, school drains the life out of you. But good to see you back:smile:
  7. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVIII 16/11)

    Thank for your kind words, Alwyn, always means a lot.
  8. Re: A fox in a land of wolves. (Denmark AAR)

    This looks like it's going to be very interesting. I do wonder what they will happen when they get to India. I think your protagonist has lots of potential and I wonder if he is going to listen to...
  9. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: November 16, 2014]

    Things don't seem to be going good for the British and it victory seems far from certain. I'm excited to see what happens in the next battle and can't wait.
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    Way of the Bow: A Chosokabe AAR
    Chapter XVIII- "An Unforgotten Treachery" is out now!
    1545- Sengoku Jidai....
  11. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Chapter XVIII- An Unforgotten Treachery

    1559-Spring
    Tawara Chikakata

    “Tono?” Tawara Chikakata bowed, though only as low as he had to and not an inch lower. He stood proud at the entrance to...
  12. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 15 - 15.11.14

    Why do you do this to us? You better have Act 2 already written up!
  13. Re: [SS 6.3] Raiders across the Sea: A Denmark AAR

    Just read the last two chapters, very funny. Your humour is a refreshing break from everything and I especially liked the part on our useless Crusades were. Keep on with this it is quite marvellous.
  14. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    You might have to wait a bit for Akara but I can assure you she will have a strong presence going forward in the story
  15. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Here's a little update about what's going on.

    Well, I haven't done much writing in the past three weeks mainly due to my yearly exams taking a tremendous toll on me. However, I have started the...
  16. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: November 10, 2014]

    Absolutely great stuff and it's wonderful to see you back. Your skill in describing battles hasn't seemed to fade while you were away and your description of the British going off to war was well...
  17. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 15 - 15.11.14

    Wow, just wow. Sorry I haven't commented or been around much, its been a really hectic and tiring past weeks. Our two protagonists seem to be dead so I wonder where this story is going to go. Great...
  18. Re: A Missionary's Perspective: The Diary of Tullio de Sao Joao

    Can't wait till you update this, is it still alive?
  19. Sticky: Poll: Re: MAARC LIII! - 2nd Place Tie-breaker!

    A tie in a tie breaker! How ironic.

    Also, only one other voter apart from myself! Come on people, we can do better than that.

    So what now, Scottish King, is there another tie breaker?
  20. Re: [SS 6.3] Raiders across the Sea: A Denmark AAR

    Liked the last two chapters. Great to see you writing again.



    Me every battle.
  21. Re: A Missionary's Perspective: The Diary of Tullio de Sao Joao

    Interesting start and a new and fresh perspective. As McScottish said, perhaps remove the 'dear diary' it's a bit unnecessary. It'll be interesting to see if and how long it takes for the priest to...
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    Sticky: Poll: Re: MAARC LIII - Vote Now!

    Yeah those were the days.

    God we sound like old men.
  23. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 11 - 17.10.14

    A Meji supporter! Ahh is this where we finally get some FOTS action? The plot twists keep coming and I love each one! Great work my friend.
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    I don't know how I cannot. I have brought great dishonour upon myself. *lines up tanto ready to plunge it into him but then suddenly a messenger comes with news of the new vote and he quickly throws...
  25. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    That's fine with me. I'll just bring this little fellowship I've got together with me ;)
  26. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 10 - 11.10.14

    Great job, Hitai, really liking it. Who is this Tsukaru Shinji though? Can't wait for yet another chapter.
  27. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    I think begin CQ editor, mod developer and moderator is getting to m's head. Either that or he's finally discovered the ring of power.
  28. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    The word count so far stands at 54, 678. May I ask why you're asking this? It totals 92 pages so far and I'm wondering how big it is going to be in the end considering we're only 16 chapters through!...
  29. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 9 - 3.10.14

    Well if you're having fun writing it then that's the best thing and it is already coming through with your writing
  30. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 9 - 3.10.14

    You're 10 chapters ahead? I'm not even 10 words ahead when I post my updates!

    Interesting twist. I feel sorry for poor Norito, Akashi is too harsh on him. I wonder what happens now for the both of...
  31. Re: A Stroll through the Tulips… A United Provinces Fan Fiction

    Where's the new edition?

    Just a piece of advice, the head of the Netherlands at the time was called the Statdholder instead of the President. Calling him by the former might help add some realism...
  32. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Ill re read over the chapter and possibly make some changes to it. All i wanted to show is a father being pushed over the edge by his arrogant son, not a schizophrenic. Thanks for the feedback.
  33. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 8 - 26.9.14

    Sorry I haven't commented in nearly a week but I was away so I didn't get a chance to read it.

    The plot twists just keep coming and coming. I really liked this update, the cliffhanger you left was...
  34. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Thanks for reading. Sorry I put those in as place holders until I got the name from in game. Do you mean his inner monologue seemed schizophrenic or more his actions. i wanted him to appear cool but...
  35. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVII 24/9)

    Thank you for the support guys, the next chapter won't be out for another two weeks at least because ik currently on holiday. Anyway, it means a lot for your support
  36. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    If you want massive play Europa Universalis
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    Way of the Bow: A Chosokabe AAR

    1545- Sengoku Jidai. The Age of the Country at War. For two hundred years the Ashikaga Shoguns have ruled from Kyoto. Great splendor and power were theirs. Now, the...
  38. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVI 1/9)

    Chapter XVII: The apple falls very far from the tree

    1559- Spring
    Chosokabe Kunichika

    Chosokabe Kunichika gleamed as he scanned a newly arrived letter.

    “What is it?” Asked his son,...
  39. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 7 - 19.9.14

    You mean I have to wait nearly a whole week!

    You are a devil, Hitai
  40. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 7 - 19.9.14

    *cue dramatic music*

    I seriously hope you're going to update this soon otherwise I might die from that cliffhanger
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