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  1. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 24 - 26.1.15

    Ah ok that makes sense, maybe just a key would do but other than not it looks nice.
  2. Re: An Island in Flames - A Tale of Dark Age Britain [Updated: 26/01/2015]

    Your usual brilliance, McScottish, very atmospheric, feels like I'm actually there (or maybe that is just the miserable rain outside). Great stuff, will rep indeed.

    Also, hurry up and submit this...
  3. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 24 - 26.1.15

    Nice map, I'm really jealous of your borders they are just so cool!. I take it the thicker black line is the Ise highway, while the dotted lines are small roads?
  4. Re: Requesting advice for first AAR

    Damn you Hitai you beat me to it!

    As my most esteemed colleague has said, an AAR will not eat but devour your time, energy and generally your will to leave. Well maybe not the last one but...
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    Re: Dies Irae

    I wonder if She is was actually as great as everyone says she was? Seems like she is more legend than truth the way these soldiers speak and think about her.
  6. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXIV 26/1)

    I doubt I'll ever be able to write something like Nowhere Legion but hey I can at least try. Happy to see you liked the last chapter as well but I hope I don't disappoint in future chapters
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    Re: By Gods' Jest

    Yeah I've always wanted to do a Skyrim AAR as well, especially after reading Swaeft's The Astray Apprentice but sadly I only have it on PS3 but I one day I really do, there is just so many different...
  8. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXIV 26/1)

    Glad to see you hate Motochika that much. This was meant to be the turning point in his character where he goes from slightly evil heir to revengeful, horrible, ultra-evil villain. Sadly, Gatling...
  9. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 24 - 26.1.15

    I just realised I hadn't read the chapter beforehand, so I was confused about how they escaped. The complicated nature of Shinji and Nishina's relationship makes for some good reading and so does...
  10. Re: Éirí Amach: Irish Rising (Ireland AAR) [updated: January 25, 2015]

    Oh how I now loathe completely those traitorous pigs Kelly and Dempsey, the blood of good Irishmen are their hands. Let us hope that the army finds refuge in Wales, this looks like a war that could...
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    Re: Dies Irae

    Some good instalments, I'm starting to really like Kana and the dialogue between her and Azyn was well done. I really want to know more about this Age of Steel and the 'Lost One's'
  12. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXIII 23/1)

    Chapter XXIV- A revenge most cruel

    1559- Mid-summer

    Chosokabe Motochika

    In a dark alley-way, lit only by the moon and stars, clothed in black, stood the heir to the Chosokabe clan. The...
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    Re: Italie - Prologue (21/12/2014)

    Let's see what happens in Italy, good to see this back again
  14. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXIII 23/1)

    No Motochika is currently in Bungo (see map in the OP if necessary) and the plan was always to meet up with Sorin and Otomo in Kyushu rather than where they were

    See you all underestimated...
  15. Re: For King and Country (Great Britain AAR) [Updated: January 24, 2015]

    Crush those damn Mughals, I say! They will pay with blood.

    I await eagerly the next Anglo-Mughal war.
  16. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXIII 23/1)

    I don't know about deserved, more lucky but hey the next competition is all yours now I'm out ;)

    And I hope you won't be rooting for the villains after the next chapter with what Motochika is...
  17. Re: Titanium Core - Chapter 5: Lessons - Updated 23 Jan 2015

    Good to see you picking up the quill again and continuing on. Dialogue, as always, was snappy and humorous and I really hope we see more.
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    Re: Dies Irae

    Having no idea of what 40K is, I'm viewing this with fresh eyes and I like the world you've created.I like the idea of mnemo-cycles and the steelseers being the ones in power and I hope you explore...
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    Re: By Gods' Jest

    You seem to be pumping out AARs and stories like some sort of writing machine, a good start, the screenshots were nicely taken, and Sei seems like a different type of protagonist. A bit sassy, good...
  20. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXII 12/1)

    Chapter XXIII- Across the straits

    1559- Mid-summer

    Tawara Chikakata had done it, much to my annoyance and shock. At sunset the day after the council meeting, a solitary rider arrived, bearing...
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    Re: Senbazuru | Chapter Three 18.1

    Don't know why I had been putting off reading this because it's the usual Hitai- great writing, nice dialogue, an interesting protagonist. I hope you do indeed to continue this, I like it a lot. I...
  22. Re: The White Horse (Hanover AAR) Updated Jan 22

    I like how you explored Gustav's guilt and the blood on his hands was a nice touch. This is slowly becoming a truly extraordinary AAR.
  23. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXII 12/1)

    You all have too little faith in Tawara CHikakata, a desperate man is often capable of doing things others can't.....

    Also, I apologise if the last couple of chapters haven't been too exciting,...
  24. Re: Calling all novelists, writers and so forth - advice needed.

    While I haven't attempted at writing a novel yet, my mother who writes part-time is currently writing multiple novels and short stories and through talking to her I think the most important aspect is...
  25. Re: Éirí Amach: Irish Rising (Ireland AAR) [updated: January 18, 2015]

    It does not look good for the Irish, damn Kelly and Dempsey and their double-crossing ways.

    Also, remember to enter this month's MAARC.
  26. Re: A fox in a land of wolves. (Denmark AAR) (Closed Lost the save file)

    Well the story doesn't have to be identical to the game in terms of characters. And only the author knows if they are the same.
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    Re: Vengeance and Forgivness

    I loved the first part of the chapter, I hope we see more of Taetoryi's internal strife. However, I was a bit confused with the second half of the chapter. Was it written in the perspective of Yaemon...
  28. Re: A fox in a land of wolves. (Denmark AAR) (Closed Lost the save file)

    Oh, this is quite sad news. How far in were you in the campaign? I was really looking forward to the continuance of this.
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    Sticky: Poll: Re: MAARC LIV The Vote!!!

    Damn not again, Hitai, I think we should stop entering competitions at the same time lest we want to have tiebreaker after tiebreaker.
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    Sticky: Poll: Re: MAARC LIV The Vote!!!

    I don't know what you're seeing Tigellinus, but I'm seeing 11 voters ​not votes.
  31. Re: An Island in Flames - A Tale of Dark Age Britain [Updated: 13/01/2015]

    I see you've finally decided on a title!

    This is intriguing, I hope you continue with it.
  32. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXII 12/1)

    Thank you and it should be but Chikakata isn't the most reliable man for the job.....
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  34. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXI 31/12)

    Chapter XXII- His father’s heir

    1559- Mid-summer

    Tawara Chikakata

    “I can do it.” Tawara Chikakata declared, arrogant and over confident. The rest of the council paid him little attention,...
  35. Re: Éirí Amach: Irish Rising (Ireland AAR) [updated: January 11, 2015]

    I continue to love your mix of historical figures into this AAR, the little reference to Robson Crusoe I liked. And its good to see Kelly and Dempsey back, perhaps they might be the downfall of...
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    Re: AAR Writing Tips

    I'm completely different, you see I love dreaming of future plots and characters, trying to figure out how it will all come into place. It's like doing a puzzle almost. But then I find myself adding...
  37. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Twelve Updated 10/1/2015

    Great stuff, I loved Nobunaga's speech and the bit with Yoshimoto was an intriguing touch. And is this the Hideyoshi? Oh how I relish having Nobunaga, Ieyasu and Hideyoshi in one story. I think it...
  38. Re: [Europa Barbarorum II] "A Mound Fit for Kings" - The Saka Rauka

    Its nice learning stuff when you read AARs and sure do I learn some new stuff when reading through this introduction. I hope you continue with it, it looks promising.
  39. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXI 31/12)

    Thank you, I could PM you a sort of tutorial, it's not that hard at, just a bit of work.

    Also don't read the below spoiler if you haven't finished all of the books of aSoIaF

    My favourites are...
  40. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXI 31/12)

    Ok guys, I've had this little project going for a bit. Since some of you asked for a map and an updated character list I've done both things but probably I've overdone it.

    Firstly, is a map. I've...
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