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October 20, 2014, 02:51 AM
Interesting start and a new and fresh perspective. As McScottish said, perhaps remove the 'dear diary' it's a bit unnecessary. It'll be interesting to see if and how long it takes for the priest to...
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Yeah those were the days.
God we sound like old men.
October 18, 2014, 05:29 AM
A Meji supporter! Ahh is this where we finally get some FOTS action? The plot twists keep coming and I love each one! Great work my friend.
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I don't know how I cannot. I have brought great dishonour upon myself. *lines up tanto ready to plunge it into him but then suddenly a messenger comes with news of the new vote and he quickly throws...
October 12, 2014, 03:19 PM
That's fine with me. I'll just bring this little fellowship I've got together with me ;)
October 12, 2014, 05:39 AM
Great job, Hitai, really liking it. Who is this Tsukaru Shinji though? Can't wait for yet another chapter.
October 12, 2014, 05:37 AM
I think begin CQ editor, mod developer and moderator is getting to m's head. Either that or he's finally discovered the ring of power.
October 05, 2014, 03:35 AM
The word count so far stands at 54, 678. May I ask why you're asking this? It totals 92 pages so far and I'm wondering how big it is going to be in the end considering we're only 16 chapters through!...
October 03, 2014, 08:52 PM
Well if you're having fun writing it then that's the best thing and it is already coming through with your writing
October 03, 2014, 05:59 AM
You're 10 chapters ahead? I'm not even 10 words ahead when I post my updates!
Interesting twist. I feel sorry for poor Norito, Akashi is too harsh on him. I wonder what happens now for the both of...
October 02, 2014, 08:37 PM
Where's the new edition?
Just a piece of advice, the head of the Netherlands at the time was called the Statdholder instead of the President. Calling him by the former might help add some realism...
October 02, 2014, 08:34 PM
Ill re read over the chapter and possibly make some changes to it. All i wanted to show is a father being pushed over the edge by his arrogant son, not a schizophrenic. Thanks for the feedback.
October 02, 2014, 08:31 PM
Sorry I haven't commented in nearly a week but I was away so I didn't get a chance to read it.
The plot twists just keep coming and coming. I really liked this update, the cliffhanger you left was...
October 02, 2014, 02:23 AM
Thanks for reading. Sorry I put those in as place holders until I got the name from in game. Do you mean his inner monologue seemed schizophrenic or more his actions. i wanted him to appear cool but...
September 29, 2014, 02:06 AM
Thank you for the support guys, the next chapter won't be out for another two weeks at least because ik currently on holiday. Anyway, it means a lot for your support
September 29, 2014, 02:04 AM
If you want massive play Europa Universalis
September 23, 2014, 11:05 PM
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Way of the Bow: A Chosokabe AAR
1545- Sengoku Jidai. The Age of the Country at War. For two hundred years the Ashikaga Shoguns have ruled from Kyoto. Great splendor and power were theirs. Now, the...
September 23, 2014, 10:53 PM
Chapter XVII: The apple falls very far from the tree
Chosokabe Kunichika gleamed as he scanned a newly arrived letter.
“What is it?” Asked his son,...
September 21, 2014, 08:40 PM
You mean I have to wait nearly a whole week!
You are a devil, Hitai
September 20, 2014, 05:11 PM
*cue dramatic music*
I seriously hope you're going to update this soon otherwise I might die from that cliffhanger
September 17, 2014, 06:25 AM
Im sorry for the delay, my computer died the other week and of course my story was one of the only documents that wasn't saved to iCloud but I have it now as I recovered my hard drive. But I couldn't...
September 15, 2014, 03:43 AM
Another great chapter. Interesting to see which way the battle goes.
I hope you still have plans for this. Just wanted you to know all the images seem to have gone. It says that the user moved or deleted the images.
September 07, 2014, 04:24 PM
Great stuff, things are not seeming to get any better for our two detectives.
September 06, 2014, 06:54 PM
Let thy comments come........
September 06, 2014, 03:48 AM
The Daily Dealings of a Merchant
Hath not a Merchant eyes? Hath not a Merchant hands, organs,dimensions,...
September 04, 2014, 05:02 PM
But still wouldn't the narrator use the first name?
September 03, 2014, 03:51 AM
I think having two characters so far apart with no real connection to each other might only take away from the story and confuse the reader. Furthermore, I think it would also slow down Nobunaga's...
September 02, 2014, 01:29 AM
Ahh ok that makes sense because at first I was like wait what another police duo but now it's clear. But shouldn't it still be Kyoumu and Tsuya because they are their first names?
September 01, 2014, 08:22 PM
Maybe I'll make him a long-running joke. He'll just pop up in various times and places:)
September 01, 2014, 04:36 PM
Great stuff, but who are these new people. Whoever they are, I'm sure they add an interesting element to the story. I wonder if there might be a clash between these two dynamic duos.
September 01, 2014, 04:30 PM
I'm glad you like the chapters. I wasn't planning on bringing back the Yumi commander but now that you mention it.
The next chapter will be out in two weeks(that's probably now my schedule) but...
September 01, 2014, 03:08 AM
Way of the Bow
Updated 9th of September
Yuki is yet again confronted with the horrors and...
September 01, 2014, 02:54 AM
Chapter XVI: Celebration and Grief
Jubilation and joy was what I had expected. Yet, I was...
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Votes good luck to all
August 30, 2014, 06:56 AM
Thanks for clearing that up about his age, I am rather forgetful these days (god that sounded old!)
I think they stuff you have planned for Nobayuki and Nobunaga is great. Its going to be great...
August 30, 2014, 06:15 AM
Yes, I believe shudo in this case would be bordering on Game of Thrones-esque (and not in the good, unpredictable, backstabbing plot way either).
I think you went well in incorporating other...
August 30, 2014, 12:09 AM
Great update with the chapter, I liked the dialogue between Nobunaga and Nobushige as well as the part from Nobayuki's point of view, he had an interesting sense of naivety, much in contrast to his...
August 29, 2014, 08:02 AM
Suzushi reminds me a bit of Gin from Road to Kyoto in her personality and just in general.
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