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  1. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVI 1/9)

    Im sorry for the delay, my computer died the other week and of course my story was one of the only documents that wasn't saved to iCloud but I have it now as I recovered my hard drive. But I couldn't...
  2. Re: The Wings of Destiny - a FotS AAR (Updated Chapter 10 - Sep 13)

    Another great chapter. Interesting to see which way the battle goes.
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    Re: ARASOI 争い

    I hope you still have plans for this. Just wanted you to know all the images seem to have gone. It says that the user moved or deleted the images.
  4. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 5 - 5.9.14

    Great stuff, things are not seeming to get any better for our two detectives.
  5. The Daily Dealings of a Merchant Commentary

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  6. The Daily Dealings of a Merchant

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    The Daily Dealings of a Merchant
    Hath not a Merchant eyes? Hath not a Merchant hands, organs,dimensions,...
  7. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 4 - 1.9.14

    But still wouldn't the narrator use the first name?
  8. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Seven Updated 10/07/2014

    I think having two characters so far apart with no real connection to each other might only take away from the story and confuse the reader. Furthermore, I think it would also slow down Nobunaga's...
  9. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 4 - 1.9.14

    Ahh ok that makes sense because at first I was like wait what another police duo but now it's clear. But shouldn't it still be Kyoumu and Tsuya because they are their first names?
  10. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVI 1/9)

    Maybe I'll make him a long-running joke. He'll just pop up in various times and places:)
  11. Re: Yōkai | Updated Chapter 4 - 1.9.14

    Great stuff, but who are these new people. Whoever they are, I'm sure they add an interesting element to the story. I wonder if there might be a clash between these two dynamic duos.
  12. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XVI 1/9)

    I'm glad you like the chapters. I wasn't planning on bringing back the Yumi commander but now that you mention it.

    The next chapter will be out in two weeks(that's probably now my schedule) but...
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  14. Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter V 17/8)

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    Chapter XVI: Celebration and Grief

    1559-Spring

    Jubilation and joy was what I had expected. Yet, I was...
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    Poll: Re: MAARC LII - The Vote

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  16. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Seven Updated 10/07/2014

    Thanks for clearing that up about his age, I am rather forgetful these days (god that sounded old!)

    I think they stuff you have planned for Nobayuki and Nobunaga is great. Its going to be great...
  17. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Seven Updated 10/07/2014

    Yes, I believe shudo in this case would be bordering on Game of Thrones-esque (and not in the good, unpredictable, backstabbing plot way either).

    I think you went well in incorporating other...
  18. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Seven Updated 10/07/2014

    Great update with the chapter, I liked the dialogue between Nobunaga and Nobushige as well as the part from Nobayuki's point of view, he had an interesting sense of naivety, much in contrast to his...
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    Re: POTW 383 - SUBMISSIONS

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  20. Re: Yōkai | 28.8.14

    Suzushi reminds me a bit of Gin from Road to Kyoto in her personality and just in general.
  21. Re: Yōkai | 28.8.14

    Who are this Yaridama family? I'm liking the Suzushi character as well. Keep it up
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    Re: Humanity Lost

    This is indeed interesting. It's been a long time since I've read a WW2 story from a nazi perspective. Good stuff
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    Re: Humanity Lost

    Ahh the famous Rex, I can't wait to see some of your fabled work. Interesting premise though, some good themes you have going on
  24. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Ok who gave m the ring of power again? The manual for it clearly states in High Elvish "Keep out of the way of Content Directors"
  25. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Hey Shiakou,

    Welcome to the Writers Study. In terms of posting on other peoples AARs and stories, I don't think any members really care too much about other posters interrupting the story. If you...
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    Sticky: [Tool] Re: PFM 3.2 - DB schema improvements

    I keep getting the "This Page Cant be Displayed" Error message when trying to download on Chrome or Internet Explorer. Do you know why?
  27. Re: [CW Tale] Journal of a Commoner

    I really do like your description of London as well as these little interesting going ons in the Secrretary of War. You might just want to edit it a bit for grammar and spelling such. I do like a...
  28. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    But inspired could be as in inspired about all the GOT-esque machinations and schemes, though its probably safer to check over at the forums before writing anything only to find out at the end that...
  29. Re: Blood Begets Blood [A Thrakian Original Tale] [Updated: 20/08/14]

    Our protagonist can't die this early can he?

    Good stuff, hope we aren't left on a cliffhanger for too long.
  30. Re: [CW Tale] Journal of a Commoner

    Interesting start, I like the journal format, especially the little quote bits. Looking forward to this, should be good seeing the goings on in 18th century parliament
  31. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    No problem but as I said before, I think you might be able to do anywhere in the world at the time even for instance China or Japan which is more up your alleyway.
  32. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    It's meant to be a short story contest(word limit circa 5,000) so they might only be able to post a chapter or two as one big chapter. But also there is nearly two months to do it so such great...
  33. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    I know this is a Total War forum and all but the developers over at Paradox games are holding a writing contest, with some pretty cool prizes and such. Main requirement is that it is set between 785...
  34. Re: In the Light of Dusk - Chapter Six Updated 6/07/2014

    I personally used the borders from the in game events which I felt suited the period nicely
  35. Re: The White Horse (Hanover AAR) Updated Aug 16

    I don't often visit the ETW AAR sub-forum (though perhaps I should) but its good to see when I do visit that it is in such capable hands as yours and Inept's(though calling him Inept sounds like an...
  36. Re: [CW Tale] Journal of a Commoner

    It'll be interesting to see where you take this. Learning about this time period in history and I wonder how you are going to show all the big things going on (enlightenment, early early industrial...
  37. Re: Blood Begets Blood [A Thrakian Original Tale]

    Interesting start you have here. Can't wait to see how the fight goes.
  38. Re: [SS 6.4 AAR] Chronicles of the Norman Game

    Interesting turn of events. Great writing and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
  39. Re: Blood Begets Blood [A Thrakian Original Tale]

    Seems interesting but will only follow this, if I'm assured of updates. I don't think my heart can go through another stopped story by you.
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