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  1. Re: Empire and Republic (Updated front page with links and character descriptions) 17th March

    Phew, I've actually got 3 more chapters complete after this, with two more in editing. Should be fun, please enjoy this chapter.


    Seamus grunted as the one legged Grubtrum rechecked his...
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    Re: Tolkien General Discussion II

    Well, Ar-Pharzon's ship was called the 'Castle of the Sea' so maybe it was literally the size of a castle? Which would be seriously impressive and suggest that smaller ships would be able to carry at...
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    Poll: Re: TotW 236: The New Shadow - The Vote!

    Hmmm, one guy only voted once I see. Maybe he liked one story so much he couldn't bear to vote for another one?
  4. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Waiting for blood and gore would probably be worth the wait (Cough cough, though it should have been included with the game for free, Cough cough)
  5. Re: The Tale of that Ingenious Numenorean Ar-Khalabkhor of Anfalas ( Chapter 1 11th March)

    Chapter 2: The Unfortunate meeting between Ar-Khalabkhor and Haladin Took.
  6. Re: Empire and Republic (Updated Chapter 12 11th March)

    Right, new chapter, new PoV, more fun.

    Iro Krannol was sitting at his desk. The Emperor had been kind enough to give him and Kiro a decent room within the Crown itself, a great honour for...
  7. Re: The Tale of that Ingenious Numenorean Ar-Kalabkhor of Anfalas

    Tome 1: The First Great Adventure

    Chapter 1: A brief history of Ar-Khalabkhor and of the start of his First Great Adventure.

    In a little town in Anfalas, whose name is lost to the depths of...
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    Re: [Idea] Open Co-op Writing

    Callagh, by the standards of fanfiction.net, not knowing anything still puts you above 50% of them.

    Top quality banter aside, the Danes are just viking forefathers, right? Therefore, think...
  9. Re: Empire and Republic (Updated Chapter 11 17th February)

    I must confess that I spent a while working on this chapter. Because hey, a few chapters in...somebody has to suffer :). I must say, I do enjoy writing about the Blackgulls...

    Rolan was in quite...
  10. The Tale of that Ingenious Numenorean Ar-Khalabkhor of Anfalas ( Chapter 2 15th March)

    (Warning, this story contains butchered use of Elvish and AdŻnaic. Such use is to be taken with several bags of salt. Viewer discretion is advised.)

    So, long, long story short, I decided to get...
  11. Sticky: Re: CA Business Practice Complaint and Discussion Thread

    You see, this is the issue. I have no issue with DLC, as long as it's worth the price and adds something. If it adds a new campaign, I could go with it and buy it (See Paradox and their expansions,...
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    Re: TotW 237 - The Lost Tales

    460 words. let's see how it goes.

    THE LOST TALES

    I climbed the gangway of the ship, my book tucked under my arm. I saw the captain on the deck, shouting at some men who were busy loading the...
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    Re: MCWC VIII Winners!!!!

    Be frank Merchant, I got lucky this year, my Uncle sent me a card merely a day late. However, he also packaged my brother's birthday card with it, and his birthday was a month earlier.

    Well done...
  14. Sticky: Re: Writers' Study Chat and Feedback - Ask all your questions here!

    Just to make Hitai smile a little, I went ahead and set up a library for my (limited) work. So all of two at the moment.
  15. Poll: Re: UK 2015 General Election (not too early I hope?...)

    Those guys need to run for Parliament, just to get this thread mildly back on track! (No pun intended)
  16. Lortano's library of pretentious awesomeness.

    My original idea was to call it 'Lortanos Fan Club: Population:1' but I felt that it would be slightly depressing. :)

    Anyways, here you can find any of my work on these forums, though there is...
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    Sticky: Re: MCWC X Submissions

    Well, I missed out last month, so I might as well have a go.

    Empire and Republic
    by Lortano

    It has been 23 years since the Great Revolution that nearly tore the Amortan Empire apart. Now,...
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    Re: TotW 236 - The New Shadow

    497 words, it was a tight one (My first draft was over 600 words.)


    The New Shadow

    I awoke, my eyes fly open as I gazed into the dark. Who was I? Why was I here? I had no time to think of...
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    Lortano's impression: Majora's Mask 3D

    http://www.cubed3.com/media/2014/November/majoramask4-1080.jpg

    So yes, being the young bastard I am, I never actually got to play Majora's Mask or Ocarina of Time when they first came out. At the...
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    Re: Nephy Rambles #2: The Perfect Cast

    John Hurt as the voice of the Deku tree would probably be a tad more awesome.
  21. Sticky: Re: Advertising Board - Subscribe to get the latest updates.

    Empire and Republic
    "The degenerate Emperor truly thinks he can clip the Blackgull's wings with yet more taxes?" Silus Blackgull, founder of the Republic of Kaprea.

    Chapter 11: Available to read...
  22. Re: Empire and Republic (Updated Chapter10 4th February)

    Chapter 11 here!

    Maurice pushed his way through the crowd of people that filled the marketplace. Killamís Reach was one of the largest cities in the Republic, and it showed. Everywhere there was...
  23. Poll: Re: UK 2015 General Election (not too early I hope?...)

    If we ran the election based on character, Farage would win without a doubt. As we run elections on policy, Conservatives still have it based on being the least worst course of action. See, labour...
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    Re: Terror attack in Denmark

    I'm sorry, but Saudi Arabia and Lebanon don't want to spread radical Islam, because that the end of the day they go back to the Middle East to fight in the Jihad against their Absolute Monarchies. If...
  25. Re: Elderly Indian badly injured by US cop for no reason, paralyzed and hospitalized

    Nope, not really it just points to the officer in question using excessive force. The OP is slightly upset that Obama lectured India on tolerance, especially considering the amunt of stories that...
  26. Poll: Re: UK 2015 General Election (not too early I hope?...)

    I don't know Dante, Stupid Idea number 1 happened a while back, at a little event called the Labour leadership elections.
  27. Poll: Re: UK 2015 General Election (not too early I hope?...)

    Well, if you want to look at it another way, Hitler persecuted some groups of society, while Stalin persecuted everyone. (End of off topic rant)

    So from what I learned from this line of pointless...
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    Re: Terror attack in Denmark

    While I don't think that immigration was THE mistake, I think it is one of the more important mistakes that allow such terrible crimes to occur. Integration is the key to a successful society after...
  29. Poll: Re: UK 2015 General Election (not too early I hope?...)

    Well...he was socialist in how he wanted the people to work for a common goal, but very right wing in that he wanted CERTAIN people to work towards that goal. Also, that little matter of genocide...
  30. Poll: Re: UK 2015 General Election (not too early I hope?...)

    To be fair shock, what exactly is the difference between the Ultra Right Third Reich (A catchy name by the way) and Stalin's Ultra Left USSR? Both were highly authoritarian, both believed that the...
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    Sticky: Re: TotW Commentary Thread.

    Take your time m, though I'm eager to write for this next Tale! :)
  32. Re: US senator questions forcing food workers to wash hands.

    As long as he kept his hands clean I suppose....each to his own ways of cleanliness.

    On the actual issue at hand, I think it's slightly absurd to suggest de-regulating mandatory signs that say...
  33. Re: Empire and Republic (Updated Chapter9 22nd January)

    The day of the great tournament had arrived, a bright day, like most in the days leading up to the grey, dreary winter. It was still cold, not unpleasantly cold, but the sort of cold that is on a...
  34. Re: Obama, State of the Union and whether he delivered on the Change promised in 2008.

    Considering the grand total of two presidents in the 21st century so far, it's hardly an achievement not being 'pants on head retarded'

    Anyways, I think that Obama did a decent job with the hand...
  35. Re: Calling all novelists, writers and so forth - advice needed.

    Agree with Hitai really, while only you can really know what you want your novel to be, it can get maddening if you have no one to bounce ideas off of, to suggest improvement, or even to confirm that...
  36. Re: Empire and Republic (Updated Chapter 8 11th January)

    Caius sighed as he rifled through large stacks of paper. His quarters were adequate for his task, yet it smelled as though nobody had ever used the room apart from him. He had managed to find a fine...
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    Poll: Re: TotW 233 - The Duel

    Cheers to all who voted for me, and to all contestants, I liked every story that got posted here. :)
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    Poll: Re: TotW 233 - The Duel

    Voted, but if everyone else who participated votes I won't feel so bad about it. :)
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    Poll: Re: TotW 233 - The Duel

    Good luck to all. :)
  40. Re: Empire and Republic (Updated Chapter7 5th January)

    Rolan hurried through the streets of Port Kaprea as the sun began to set over the mighty city. He’d been held up in an argument with an angry merchant over some lost cargo. Trying to explain that...
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