Opening of the story

  1. Tyler5656
    Tyler5656
    Long ago when the universe was young, two powers waged a war amongst the Cosmos. Lucian Nailo, the god of all things good and pure; and The Forgotten, a being of pure malice and hatred, who had one purpose in his life: Sow chaos and war. For countless eons they their war, destroying whole galaxies in the process until they reach a small dot called Eldaria, This planet had been untouched by their war and they came to an agreement: They would end the destruction and fight the war here, so the rules were agreed upon and to ensure that it was upheld, Hell was created. Split up into nine sectors and ruled by one Archdevil named Asmodeus, he was tasked with upholding all the laws and contracts for this world and to take all evil souls that were not too drastically evil. From that day their war began and both sides created lesser gods to lead their armies and for hundreds of eons they fought and fought until one day, when the nine races had carved out their kingdoms and named their first kings; a pious human king named Brandon Soul found out how to turn the tide for Lucian and that night he prayed and it was answered. A light broke through the clouds and a sword flew slowly though the air; a hand and a half sword made of pure divine ice and forged to instantly freeze all those who touch this sword with dishonourable intentions, and it makes whomever wields it master of ice and winter itself. On the blade a message was inscribed in glowing blue runes: "Victory, Vigilance, Sacrifice" on one side and the other "May evil fear this blade, and may its wielder always find his mark true". That morning he raised his banners and marched to war, over three million warriors in all, stomped their way to strike down the Forgotten's greatest general: a Powerful and immortal Dark elf named Uriyaca. A beast of unimaginable malice and fury, armed with a mace called "Black Fury" and an army of demons, Orcs, Goblins and Dark Elves whose numbers where infinite and whose hunger for death was insatiable. The night before his men were to lay siege to his obsidian tower, the armies of the Elves and Dwarves joined his cause as well as the full might of the Angels. Together with their combined strength of twelve million, they assaulted the tower and broke into The Forgotten's realm: The Abyss, a never ending vortex of chaotic evil and demons. For ten years they fought and died to breach the capital where the Forgotten had forged his empire, and in the process Brandon Soul managed to slay The Forgotten and seal his soul in platinum and purple diamond ring. With their leader banished, Uriyaca and his armies retreated deep within the inferno of the Abyss and peace overtook the land. Brandon Soul was given the largest chunk of the land and forged his new Kingdom: The Kingdom of Frostmere and a treaty of peace was struck between him, King Niaru Frostmane of the Elves and High King Orik Bloodaxe that their kingdoms would be allies and defend the mortal lands from all evil. Finally for saftey, King Brandon placed the ring inside a box of pure astral metal, the strongest metal in the universe, and had it buried deep under his castle, vowing to never allow this evil to torment the lands.That was twelve thousand years ago and the allies of The Forgotten have awoken and have been waging war against the Free Alliance of Dwarves, Elves and Men. Now the new King, Martin Soul has taken the throne, his task: to defend Frostmere and the world from evil and the hordes of Orc's that have attacked his people. (Hope you guys liked this little peek at the story so far! Pm me or comment if you would like me to add or fix anything!)
  2. SoulGamesInc
    SoulGamesInc
    In battle, Victory. In peace, Vigilance. For our people, Sacrifice!
    Very nice Tyler. On a side note, make Martin married to Lyanna Soul. They have 2 sons: Prince Arthur (the Oldest and Heir) and Prince Tyler. Also a daughter named Arya who wishes to be a warrior like her brothers.
  3. Uriyaca
    Uriyaca
    lol, awesome
    Hoping Uriyaca could rule the earth at the end of the book. That would be awesome
  4. SoulGamesInc
    SoulGamesInc
    Evil always gets defeated! He could pull a Saruman and try to take power for himself tho.
  5. Riverknight
    Riverknight
    sounds good!
  6. Uriyaca
    Uriyaca
    Yeah, if my character is sorta like a Saruman that's great as well. He is my favorite LOTR character
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